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PostSubject: need help..."saath"   need help..."saath" Empty2008-11-11, 23:54

woh kehte hai "kuch pal ka saath tha mera"
humne kaha a jane jana "wo umar bhar ka intezaar tha mera"


guys iske aage nahi likh pa rahi..

bahut try kiya par wo nahi aa raha jo dil mein hai...

bahut feelings hai ye word ko lekar...

plz try karo if aap log likh paye....

kya koyi help kar sakhta hai???

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PostSubject: Re: need help..."saath"   need help..."saath" Empty2008-11-11, 23:57


heenu tumse behtar koi nahin bayan kar payega tumhari feelings ko....
chalo kuch khud try karo
kuch hum madad kar denge
iske aage ka kuch hint do na

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PostSubject: Re: need help..."saath"   need help..."saath" Empty2008-11-12, 00:27

heena ye tumhari poem ke aage ka part nahi he bas tumhari line read karke muje mere dost ke kuch kahe labs yad aa gaye aaj usne kaha " hamara sath yaha tak hi tha "

Quote :
Pal do pal ka saath hamara Pal do pal ki Yaari
Aaj ruke to kal karni hain Chalne ki taiyaari
Basti basti Parbat parbat Gaata jaaye banjara
Le kar dil ka ik tara

ye line meri nahi he mohd. rafi jee ke ak bahut purane song ki he
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PostSubject: Re: need help..."saath"   need help..."saath" Empty2008-11-12, 00:40

wo kehte hay "yeh he mohabbat hay"
hum ne kaha "do pal ki chaht hay"

wo kehtay hay"Apna khuda mana hay tumko"
hum ne kaha "youn na behlaoo humko"

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PostSubject: Re: need help..."saath"   need help..."saath" Empty2008-11-12, 01:05

Heenu, Hume Shayari karana to nahi aata ..
Pata hai tabb bhi tum dost wah wah karate ho

Lakin just jo dil me aati hai baate wahi kalam likh deti hai
Abb usse chhando , kavita me pirona to nahi aata

Fir bhi koshish karate hai

Or haa yeh jo do line likhi hai aapne....
Usse hi unn kirdaro ki soch lekar kuch lines dhyaan me aayi or likh di ..


Aankho me nammi or otho pe siskiyaa
Chahare pe shikan or Man me machalata tufan liye
Woh kahate hai "Kuch pal ka saath tha mera"

Pyaar ka prakhar deep liye hruday me
Man ko usane apne yun samjhaya
Kitne mushkilo se dil ki baato ko othho par thaharaya
Or Halke se apne gumo ko chhupayaa

Or Kahh diya "Kuchh Pal Ka Saath Tha Mera"

Usake dil ki baate saari jaani hai
Usaki baato ko usse jyada humne maani hai
Othho pe ruki baate humne Usake Dil pahchani hai
Janate hai usaki iss baat me koi uski pareshaani hai

So kya hua uss pareshaani ko bhi apna sa jaana hai
Jo tumne kaha ki gujara pal sirf inta saath tha mera
Wohi humare liye Tera umar bhar ka intejaar rahengaa
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PostSubject: Re: need help..."saath"   need help..."saath" Empty2008-11-12, 01:14

its just an try to help you out.
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saadgi toh humari zara dekhiye aitebaar apke vaade par karliya
baat toh sirf iqraar ki thi magar intezar apka umar bhar karliya


ek boond bhi ashqon ki daman na bhigo paye
gham uski amanat hai palkon pe saja rakhna


dard badkar dawa na hojaye zindagi be maza na hojaye
shayad aye woh fir ayadat ko mujh ko ya rab shifa na hojaye
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PostSubject: Re: need help..."saath"   need help..."saath" Empty2008-11-12, 02:21


Jate jate hothon se nikli unke ye baat
Main kuch bhi na keh pai khadi rahi chup chap
Aankhon me thi nami uske anchhue se jazbaat
Hothon pe thi wahi muskurahut dil me ek tufaan

Maine usko chaaha hai jaise ho meri jaan
Lekin mere preet se wo raha hardum anjaan
Anjaan raha ya anjaan bana maine ye na jana
Lekin dil me dard utha jab wo ho gaya begaana

Uske dil ki baat kahi uske naino ne din raat
Lekin lub se na nikli ab tak uske wo baat
Jate jate bole wo achcha raha aapka saath
Ab jate hain fir milenge yanhin tak tha apna saath

Hum kya kehte dekhte rahe chup chap
Jab pehle hi na kah paye unse apne jazbaat
Ab bas itna hi kehna hai tham k unka haath
Raah takenge hum aapki sari sari raat

Tum kehte rahe … kuch pal ka sath tha mera
Hum kehte rahe…oo jane jaana wo umar bhar ka intezar hai mera….!!!


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Ek kalpana...Ek Ehsaas...Ek Aastha...Ek Parchai….
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Hmmmm.....

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PostSubject: Re: need help..."saath"   need help..."saath" Empty2008-11-12, 21:40

Thank You so much frnds...

Its really wonderful being over here..

I got what i wanted exactly...

everyone has writtn fantastic...

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