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Tu yaad na aye roz yahi jatan karti hu,
Tera khyaal na chhu jaye dil ko,
Iss liye har kissi se dur rahti hu,
Tere loutne ka arrman nahi hai ab,
Phir bhi kyon unmeed rakhti hu,
Tere dil mei kuch nahi hai mere liye,
Yeh jante huye bhi tumse pyaar karti hu,
Muje pata hai dil nadan hai mera
Jo ek bewafa se pyaar karta hai,
Phir bhi bhula dene ki usse,
nakam koshish kiya karta hai…

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Shukriya Nancy ji,
arz hai.....
Kya machayi usne mere dil ke kashane me dhoom,
Shor hai jiske liye kaabe me butkhane me dhoom,
Zulf ko khola to kar is dil ki shoris ka eelaz,
Shakht deewane ne kee zanzeer khul jane ki dhoom.
adaab

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roti hui aankhon me intezaar hota hai,
na chahte hue bhi pyar hota hai,
kyun dekhte hai hum vo sapne jinke tutne par bhi,
unke sach hone ka intezaar hota hai


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Hey Gul Very nice Yaar

Such me tum to aate hi kamaal kar rahi ho

Bahut achchha laga tumhaari shairy padh ke.

Such me mere paas to shabd hi nahi hain.....



sadakat ho to dil seeno me khichne lagte hain waise,
haqeeqat khud ko manwa leti hai mani nahi jati,


wo yun dil se gujarte hain nki aahat tak nahi hoti,
wo yun aawaj dete hain ki pahchani nahi jati,


Nahi maloom kis aalam me maine tujhko dekha gul,
Koi aalam ho lekin dil ki hairani nahi jati.

Tuli

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Shukriya Nancy ji aur Tuli ji, main aise kuchh bhi nahi main sirf koshis karti hun,
aap logon ke samne main kya aur meri hasti kya????

Mashook aur bhi bata de jahan me,
Karta hai kaun zulm kisi par teri tarah,


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Gul bahut achchha yaar
Tum to waakai bahut achchi tarah se mahkne lagee ho
I lv u gul n like ur id tooooooooooo gul gul.

Mashook ki haalat na wo samjhe kabhi,
Dil tod kar jaane tha jinki fitrat me !!
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[b]Shukriya Saniya ji,
[color=brown]Number milao dil ka ki dil ki jalan mite,
Dekha jo unko bhul gaye apane aap ko.

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Minblowing gul gul
Its super.
simply awesome !!
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YA RUB MERI KHOYI HUI TAQDEER BANA DAY...
MERAY DIL KA CONNECTION ARZOO SAY YA GUL GUL SAY MILADAY
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Connection hi nahi gul ka tumhe dil bhi milega,
Rukhsar par hoton ka ek til bhi milega,
Ab puri hogi ishk ki rudad saniya,
Mahkegi fiza nilu se ab Nil bhi milega.
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Aarzoo ji shukriya,

Dil me sama gayi hain qayamat ki shokhiyan,
Do char din rahi thi kisi ke nigah me.

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gul gul wrote:
Shukriya Nancy ji aur Tuli ji, main aise kuchh bhi nahi main sirf koshis karti hun,
aap logon ke samne main kya aur meri hasti kya????

Mashook aur bhi bata de jahan me,
Karta hai kaun zulm kisi par teri tarah,


gul

gul ji ye kehena hi bahut badi bat he ........aapne bilkul sahi kaha Nanci di or tuli di hi nahi N n N ke har shayar me jo bat he uski barabari koi nahi kar sakta.............or apne aaj ye pove kar diya
apke liye ek adna sa tofa bataur Welcome to N n N arz he~~~~


log kehene he ki asmaan pe ghar he tera,
mere pair zameen par dikhe to hairat hone lagi~~~~
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chand kehne laga khubsurti mujhme kya he ja chakor se poochh,
are zalim chakor to deewana he or deewanagi ki yahi to sada he~~~
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Wha Wha Wha Idrich to Dhoom Picture Lageli Hai, Apun ka Matbal Idrich Dhoom Macheli hai ..................... To Hum Bhi Ye Chahate hai ki
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Abhi Main aap ki bat ko pure ehtamat ke sath yaqeen karti hun ,
wakayi is bazm me aise fankar hain jo apane aap me ek mishal hain.
aur ba hosh main yah bhi janti hun ki main kuchh bhi nahi, in sab ke samne,
aap khud itane bade shayar hain ki har jagah aap ki post dekhti hun,
mujhe abhi aur bahut kuchh sikhna hai aap logon se,
Abhi ji mujhe jara bhi galatfahmi nahi is bazm ke bare me, na hi yahan ke shayar aur shayra ke liye.
aap ka bahut shukriya hame reply karne ka.

Kitna bada mere fan ka mujhe eenam mila,
Marhaba zakhm shumari ki bada kaam mila.

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Sandesh ji shukriya
Hangama mach raha hai khayalon ki bazm me,
Tune dabi zuban se jane kaha hai kya.

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Hey Abhi........
Tx Bhai......
Etni bhi na de hawa kahin Aasmaan pe chadh na jaaoon,
Rahne de Abhi Zameen par ki kuchh aur Ghum bhi baaki hain !!
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bahut khoob gul ji jo sochkar apke liye do line likhi thi aap par ekdum sahi thi.......
rahi bat meri to me zameen ka ek khwab hu,
mujhe taron si ehmiyat na de,
dhool ka ek gubar hu dharti se thoda utha hua,
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Wah Wah Wah Wah Wah !!!
Wowwwwww So Sweet !!
Maan Gaye Gul Gul Ji Aapko.......

ur words so touching , comes from deep heart ...Superb !!
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sukriya sam aap to wakayee achhi akhlak ke malik hain, aap ko adab ki bahut achhi pakad hai, aakhir sayar jo thahre,

Hawa ki narm khirami bhi kya qayamat hai,
Ki uski yaad umad aayi hai ghata ki tarah,
Main usko soch to sakti hun chhu nahi sakti,
Wo mere samne mauzood hai khuda ki tarah.

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Wow Wow !!
Achha ?? Aur Wo Bhi Naughty Maha Shaitaan ''Sam''
Ha Ha Ha Ha.... NN mein sab mujhse hi to pareshan hain !!
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Aap to wakayi kamal ke fankaar hain janab,
kyon na kahun ki kuchh achhe log bhi hote hain?

Raton ko taron se, din ko zarrae-khaq se,
Kaun hai jisse nahi sunte fasana tera.

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meri aarzoo ne dil mein uttara tha tumhe
khwaaboen ki tarha aafsanoen ne sawara tha tumhe
nafratein jhel kar bhi karta raha mohhabat tumse
sarfarosh tha mein sunn naa saka ki kitne yaro ne peechey se pukaara tha mujhe
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aandheroen mein bhi paa kar roshni parwano se
mein ids shama-e-faroshi mein jalta chala gaya..
ab peechey mudh kar dekha toen aaya hosh mujhe
ki manzelein thi chooti sabhi aur mein aakeyla reh gaya tha...

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Bahut achha khayal hai pari, aap sach much ki pari ho,
aap ke parwaz pyar ki hawaon mei failte lagte hain.

Ab aur log isi raste se aayenge,
Dagar eek aur bana dun isi dagar ke kareeb,

Yahi duaa hai mere doobte huye dil ki,
Kisi ki kashti na aaye kabhi bhanwar ke kareeb.
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