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PostSubject: Submit your own poetry...   Submit your own poetry... Empty2008-06-07, 11:51

Hi N&N's Rocking Members
yaha par ham ak game start karte he. khud ki likhi hui poem post karni he. to dosto ho jav saru. magar khyal rahe poem original honi chahiye. kisiki copy ki hui nahi :)
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PostSubject: Re: Submit your own poetry...   Submit your own poetry... Empty2008-06-07, 11:59

Sabse Pahele Me Start Karta Hu.
Ye Poem Mere Ak Dost ko dedicated he jo mere liye sab kuch he

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PostSubject: Re: Submit your own poetry...   Submit your own poetry... Empty2008-06-07, 16:05

Bahut accha likha hai good going....

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aaj tujko mujh mein samane ko dil chahta hai
teri juthi baato ko aapane ko dil chahta hai,

main janti hu to kabhi kisi ek ka nahi ho sakhta
fir bhi tujko dil se lagane ko dil chahta hai,

baar baar dosti mein dokha pa kar bhi
Aaj tujhse dokha pane ko dil chahta hai,

bhaari mehfil mein mujhe azmane ki aadat hai tujhe
aaj khud ko ess mehfil mein azmane ko dil chahta hai.



Hope others wil write too

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PostSubject: Re: Submit your own poetry...   Submit your own poetry... Empty2008-06-07, 23:59


:flower: Nick , achcha likhte ho. Aur Heena ki tou baat hi kya hai.
Saniya tou darati hai..............kuch maine bhi koshish ki hai........
Ek choti si cute poem...........do chahne walon ke naam.......


Badla badla sa mausam lagta hai
Har dil aaj tou khushnuma lagta hai
main hoon gaflat mai doston
Ya mujhpar yeh teri dosti ka asar lagta hai.

Teri yaadon ka har soo pahra lagta hai
Har chehra roshan roshan lagta hai
yun tou gujari hoon pahle bhi yahan se
Har taraf jaise teri khushboo ka saaya lagta hai

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:twisted: v nice runjhun .....MAGAR SACH WAHI HAY JO MAIN NAY LIKHA ....
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PostSubject: Re: Submit your own poetry...   Submit your own poetry... Empty2008-06-08, 11:29

Wow Runjhun Kya Likha He Aapne. Amazing... RaJ Ki Design Ki Kya Tarif Kare. Use Koi Bit Nahi Kar Sakta. Rahi Bat Hamari Choti Shayar ( HeenaKhan ) Ki to Uska Andaz Hi Nirala He. Saniya Uff Kya Kahe Mujse Bhi Jyada Active Member He Vo. Bahut Masti, Shararat He Isme. Sabko Hasati He magar Khud Kisi Gum Me Khoiyi He. Sabse Last Me Ye Game Start Karne Vale DoNji.. Aapko Poem Likhna Aa Gaya Kya? :lol: Chalo Ak DoN India Se Kam To Huva. Are Baki Sab Kaha He Hamare Shayar :) Chalo Kuch Post Karo Yar...

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PostSubject: Re: Submit your own poetry...   Submit your own poetry... Empty2008-06-08, 14:16

likhna chahti ho to baya karo sab sunege ajj ,
kehna chahti ho to kaho sab sunege ajj ,
kal tumhari bat kahi fiki na pad jaye,
suna do jo sunana chahti ho ajj...........

tumhe dar he ki kahi gum
na aa jaye ,

to bhool jao ki gum kya heeeeeeee,
tumhe dar he ki kahi kisika nam na aa jaye
to soch lo gumnami se achha he ye nam tumhare labo par aa jayee,
na socho na ruko ab beh jane do jo dil ki nadiya behti he ajj...........
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PostSubject: Re: Submit your own poetry...   Submit your own poetry... Empty2008-06-08, 19:12

Superb written by all...

Saniya yaar ab tak pyaar kiya nahi or tum itna dara rahi hu
pyaar ka ehsaas to karo bahut miltha hai wo dard uske samne kuch nahi

Raj ko hi dekh lo Jaanu Jaanu karke sab ko daare rakha hai usse koyi batao ke hum jan gaye uski jaanu bahut sweet hai...(kidding)

Sonu ne superb likha hai she hav awesom love feeling

Runjhun u r really angel of happiness

abhi good going yaar

aurrrrr mr ADMIN tareef se kuch nahi hota aapne sab ki tareef kardi ab kuch likh kar bhi batao....

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Main itna accha likhti toh nahi fir bhi try kiya hai hope itna bura nahi hoga..
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Ek Be-Qarari mai Doob ker
Ek Masti main Jhoom ker
Mohabbat ne apna Izhaar chaha!




Zindgi mai pehli baar
Dil ne kisi ko Dil se chaha!

Khawab bane Aarzoo ki tarha
Umeed bani Zindgi ki tarha
Her Ehsaas ne Iqraar chaha!

Zindgi mai pehli baar
Dil ne kisi ko Dil se chaha!

Aitbaar ka hath thaam ker
Yadon ko Hamrah le ker
Is Masoom ne be-ikhtiar chaha!

Zindgi mai pehli baar
Dil ne kisi ko Dil se chaha!

Ek Khoobsurat Etminaan ki tarha
Tum hoye Hamari Duaa ki tarha
Hum ne Tumhain Toot ker chaha!

Zindgi mai pehli baar
Dil ne kisi ko Dil se chaha!


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